Beginning, Middle, And End: A Love Story

October 21, 2011
By lovelace92 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
lovelace92 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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Bruised, battered, beaten:
The condition of my heart
How did it get this way?
Where do I start?
The beginning was beautiful
The start of something new
like a flower in the sun
The relationship grew
Sweet, passionate kisses
holding hands in the park
Spending summers together
sharing secrets in the dark
All of a sudden
feelings got stronger
three words were spoken
and our love grew stronger
Then as soon as it started
our love came to a halt
the trust was broken
and it was all my fault
Yet he found it in his heart
to forgive me and stay
I promised to be better
and never again stray
As days passed
and months turned into years
There became less smiles
and an abundance of tears
He would yell
and I would scream
we were never on the same page
at least, that's how it seemed
Promises were made
but never kept
expectations weren't met
and tears were wept



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on Nov. 2 2011 at 6:54 am
lovelace92 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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thank you very much

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on Nov. 1 2011 at 6:30 pm
Kat.1 BRONZE, Weston, West Virginia
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"and there she lived with no other thought than to love, and be loved my me." -Edgar Allen Poe

absolutley beautiful! :) i love it

on Oct. 31 2011 at 3:29 pm
lovelace92 SILVER, Louisville, Kentucky
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thank you. ill def have a look :)

on Oct. 28 2011 at 1:34 pm
Hummingbird GOLD, Berryton, Kansas
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Life is either a daring adventure or nothing. -Helen Keller

This is brilliant! I love your detail and transitions and you communicate the changing emotions perfectly! I would love it if you had some time to check out some of my work.


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