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You did it, you’ve done it, you’ve broken my heart
Just when it was back together, you tore it apart
You smacked, you wacked it, you broke it in two
All over maniacal, perverted, egotistical you
Just when I thought you were the best of the best
It turns out you were just like the rest
You played me, you swayed me, you make believed
That you actually cared about shy, silly, dorky me
I hope your happy, your joyful, your just swell
Because in 90 years we all know you’ll be in hell
It makes me laugh all the lies that you’ve told
Because some days like the rest of us you’ll get old
And then you’ll realize you will have never really got to be,
With shy, silly, dorky, IMACULATE me :)



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thefamoustapper said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 10:49 am:
This is great! i loved the rhymes and the wordchoice. Keep writing!
 
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Lourel15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 7:47 pm:
I love this poem!!!! I liked the rhymes and the over all feel of it. This one goes on my favorites list!!!
 
EmmazingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 8, 2011 at 9:28 pm :
Thank you so much! :)
 
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