Egotistical you

September 1, 2011
By Emmazing GOLD, Alexandria, Virginia
Emmazing GOLD, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
I'm simply complicated.


You did it, you’ve done it, you’ve broken my heart
Just when it was back together, you tore it apart
You smacked, you wacked it, you broke it in two
All over maniacal, perverted, egotistical you
Just when I thought you were the best of the best
It turns out you were just like the rest
You played me, you swayed me, you make believed
That you actually cared about shy, silly, dorky me
I hope your happy, your joyful, your just swell
Because in 90 years we all know you’ll be in hell
It makes me laugh all the lies that you’ve told
Because some days like the rest of us you’ll get old
And then you’ll realize you will have never really got to be,
With shy, silly, dorky, IMACULATE me :)



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TapTap SILVER said...
on Sep. 10 2011 at 10:49 am
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

This is great! i loved the rhymes and the wordchoice. Keep writing!

Emmazing GOLD said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 9:28 pm
Emmazing GOLD, Alexandria, Virginia
18 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm simply complicated.

Thank you so much! :)

on Sep. 8 2011 at 7:47 pm
Laurel15 BRONZE, Eastlake, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams." Eleanor Roosevelt

I love this poem!!!! I liked the rhymes and the over all feel of it. This one goes on my favorites list!!!




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