*Haunting Lovers*

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One last kiss, colder then our goodbyes,
A love for forever sadly now dies .
this burning dream has come to our nightmare,
still I half to think the whispers of this place are no longer fare .
an the blurr burns over our eyes as we loose grip whats real,
our hands slip further away an you'll never awake with life's feel.
I can't let this go buts its leaving me deeply,
an your misery eyes are getting heavy as you get sleepy.
our minds meet again an share a unforgettable farewell,
an you'll leave this world as before of a broken shell.
please don't go out like this they're is so much ahead,
an reed these words keep them close, the ones I never said....





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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 2, 2011 at 4:51 pm

I like it :) It's cute but beautiful at the same time...

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dancestar said...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 4:01 pm
that was really cute! and had so much emotion to put into it..i was nearly crying by the end...especially the last line "an reed these words keep them close, the ones i never said" beautiful... the rhymes also never felt forced...plz keep writing cuz tht was amazing and check out some of my work like "Girl Next Door" thanks!
 
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