*Haunting Lovers*

August 14, 2011
By Br33na GOLD, Dexter, Oregon
Br33na GOLD, Dexter, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Life is beautiful, but sometimes we forget what Life is an mix it up* but life is Life, The most beautiful thing you can remember :) - Me <3


One last kiss, colder then our goodbyes,
A love for forever sadly now dies .
this burning dream has come to our nightmare,
still I half to think the whispers of this place are no longer fare .
an the blurr burns over our eyes as we loose grip whats real,
our hands slip further away an you'll never awake with life's feel.
I can't let this go buts its leaving me deeply,
an your misery eyes are getting heavy as you get sleepy.
our minds meet again an share a unforgettable farewell,
an you'll leave this world as before of a broken shell.
please don't go out like this they're is so much ahead,
an reed these words keep them close, the ones I never said....


The author's comments:
*haunting Lovers* is about lovers death an how any moment can be you or A close ones last so make the seconds count ~*<3*~

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Lexie96 GOLD said...
on Nov. 2 2011 at 4:51 pm
Lexie96 GOLD, Havana, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Now Cinderella don't you go to sleep, it's such a bitter form of refuge, oh don't you know the kingdom's under siege, and everbody needs you. - The Killers

I like it :) It's cute but beautiful at the same time...

Check out my stuff sometime?


dancestar GOLD said...
on Aug. 17 2011 at 4:01 pm
dancestar GOLD, Westford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
BE WHO YOU WANNA BE NOT WHO OTHERS WANNA SEE!!!

that was really cute! and had so much emotion to put into it..i was nearly crying by the end...especially the last line "an reed these words keep them close, the ones i never said" beautiful... the rhymes also never felt forced...plz keep writing cuz tht was amazing and check out some of my work like "Girl Next Door" thanks!


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