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The wind blowing,
my heart glowing.
No reason to fear,
because you are here.

Just in spirit,
I can hear it.
But it’s only me;
the world cannot see.

My tongue is tied.
I don’t know why.
My mind is tangled;
my thoughts are jangled.

I sit in sun
while you have fun.
I am all alone
as the day does drone.

As one ponders,
my mind wanders.
Waiting for that kiss
that my lips have missed.

Played many times,
I create rhymes
to put to paper
imagined capers.

Top of my mind –
thoughts left behind.
The front of my brain
do memories stain.

Stricken each night;
full of delight.
Dreams are filled with you
and things that you do.

Caboose* hugged tight,
I’m done tonight.
My body drifts to
sweet visions of you.





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writerfreak21231This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2011 at 9:35 am
It was was AWESOME!!! great job! (Sorry for advrertizing) I just wrote two stories called nightstalker and the beast. If anyone could check them out and post some comments and feedback that would be great. Thanks! and keep writing everybody! :)(:
 
writingchick This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 16, 2011 at 4:07 pm
I agree with NinjaGirl. It was entertaining to read (: Check out my work?? Thanks and keep it up!
 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 9:10 pm
I like the rhyme scheme and short stanzas. It was a fun read. :) Check out some of my work?
 
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