In Time

May 13, 2011
By Bgeekgirl24 GOLD, Bellefontaine, Ohio
Bgeekgirl24 GOLD, Bellefontaine, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Eat healthy. Excersize daily. Die anyway.


Glistening in the sunlight
Or of what little chrome it has,
And its paint shining so bright

The rust is what makes it so unique
The dents and dings,
Just like when people call me a geek

As some say it needs some work
I say it’s perfect,
Like a piece of Picasso artwork

It may not be able to drive yet
But oh well,
It will someday, I’d be willing to bet

Of the billions of pictures I took
None can truly capture the beauty,
Even if I take a second look

Just the feeling of sitting in the driver’s seat
Makes me feel so alive,
The feeling is oh so sweet

Just knowing that it’s mine
It will be done,
In time


The author's comments:
I own a 1978 Z28 Camaro and it has inspired me to write this poem.

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on Nov. 15 2011 at 5:33 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I like your comparisions (sp?) to artwork that you use to describe your car and how you describe sitting in the driver's seat. Very nice! I also like how I didn't notice that it rhymed until I started critiquing it. (poems that rhyme are hard for me to read)

on Nov. 13 2011 at 11:48 am
BlueItaly BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Driven to the best by being stopped by the worst"

I really loved It amazing imagery like everyone says :D

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 9:20 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
13 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

Wow - this is fantastic!  The imagery is well done and beautiful, and I especially like how you compared yourself to the car - that was so cool!

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 11:58 am
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

Amazing imagery! The rhyming sequence was also very good.

lamelola GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2011 at 1:34 am
lamelola GOLD, Wichita, Kansas
14 articles 19 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
The problem is, you think you have time.

Imagery was amazing!  GOOD WORK

Dark_Mind GOLD said...
on Jun. 29 2011 at 8:44 pm
Dark_Mind GOLD, Little Rock, Arkansas
11 articles 0 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sounds like a Personal Problem."

I really love this, the rhyme scheme, the meaning, and it flowed really well. Great Job.!




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