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Glistening in the sunlight
Or of what little chrome it has,
And its paint shining so bright

The rust is what makes it so unique
The dents and dings,
Just like when people call me a geek

As some say it needs some work
I say it’s perfect,
Like a piece of Picasso artwork

It may not be able to drive yet
But oh well,
It will someday, I’d be willing to bet

Of the billions of pictures I took
None can truly capture the beauty,
Even if I take a second look

Just the feeling of sitting in the driver’s seat
Makes me feel so alive,
The feeling is oh so sweet

Just knowing that it’s mine
It will be done,
In time





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Im--NOT--RayynThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 5:33 pm
I like your comparisions (sp?) to artwork that you use to describe your car and how you describe sitting in the driver's seat. Very nice! I also like how I didn't notice that it rhymed until I started critiquing it. (poems that rhyme are hard for me to read)
 
BlueItaly said...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 11:48 am
I really loved It amazing imagery like everyone says :D
 
ritabelle511 said...
Jul. 26, 2011 at 9:20 pm
Wow - this is fantastic!  The imagery is well done and beautiful, and I especially like how you compared yourself to the car - that was so cool!
 
Robyn97 said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 11:58 am
Amazing imagery! The rhyming sequence was also very good.
 
lola.loves.stars said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 1:34 am
Imagery was amazing!  GOOD WORK
 
Dark_Mind said...
Jun. 29, 2011 at 8:44 pm
I really love this, the rhyme scheme, the meaning, and it flowed really well. Great Job.!
 
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