Elementary Love

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Girl in love,
falling for the wrong guy.
She ignores his flaws,
hopelessly lost in his eyes.

She gave him her fragile heart,
not knowing he would tear it apart.
He cradles it in the palms of his hands.
No strings attached,
he knew where they stand.

The chemistry between them,
slowly reach.
Her heart he holds,
he dare not breach.
She gets up out of her seat,
takes a breath and gave her speech.

The love they had,
was like no other.
He takes her hand and says,
we'll always love each other.





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YankeeSwagg said...
Jul. 9, 2011 at 12:13 pm
Thank you jeepster (:
 
jeepsterlover said...
May 7, 2011 at 10:25 pm
very cool....and true.....
 
YankeeSwagg said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 7:40 am
thank you teenage paradise (:
 
YankeeSwagg said...
Apr. 12, 2011 at 7:39 am
thank you dark shadow (:
 
TeenageParadise_114 said...
Apr. 10, 2011 at 1:36 pm
this is so cuteee(:
 
Dark_ShAdow said...
Mar. 23, 2011 at 9:25 am
This is really cute
 
RainFever224 said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 10:42 am
adorable poem
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Mar. 22, 2011 at 9:38 am
thank you for your commentary
 
Sykesbaby414 said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 9:10 am
beautifully written babygirl (:
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Jan. 10, 2011 at 8:12 am
thanks love (:
 
nyah_nicole said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:09 am
i think your poem is very sweet !
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:20 am
why thank you (((:
 
Zyaire said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:00 am
this is a beautiful poem. ican relate
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:19 am
thanks (((:
 
LovelyBones26 said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 1:57 pm
This poem is so cute and it explains the way that young live really is and has been for a long time
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:18 am
thanks (((:
 
Lovely Bones26 said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 1:54 pm
this poem is so cute and i love the way it explains young love
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:18 am
why thank you (:
 
claire-baire said...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 7:46 am
AWWWWWW!!!! thats sooo cute!!!! i love it!
 
YankeeSwagg replied...
Nov. 9, 2010 at 8:15 am
thank you very much (:
 
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