Go, Girl MAG

By Samantha Reyes, Coral Gables, FL

Run, girl
Flee from your dreams
Too optimistic
Find a new reality

Jump, girl
On the brink of your scheme
No more ingenuity
Nothing as it seemed

Sprint, girl
No longer one
Changed forever
Your past has just begun

Cry, girl
You are broken
Heart in pieces
Nothing left to be spoken



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Misfit95 said...
on Oct. 3 2012 at 11:05 am
Misfit95, Dover, Ohio
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This is an incredible poem! I love it!! I like the way it's structured, and it's something people can relate to. I'm not surprised it was published in the magazine. Great job! :)

irishlass317 said...
on Feb. 17 2012 at 11:34 pm
irishlass317, Jefferson City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"I asked Jesus 'How much do you love me?' He answered 'This much.' And He streched out His arms and died."

This is a wonderful poem!! great job! I really enjoyed it!

eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:38 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Wow. I love the way you condense a whole story into four small verses so that each follows a similar structure, and their differences hint at the progression of time passing. 

Fia-fia BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2011 at 5:10 pm
Fia-fia BRONZE, Bethesda, Maryland
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This is very interesting and well written, though hard to completely understand at first glance, which is good. Thank you

:)


on Aug. 12 2011 at 9:37 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

im not surprised this was put in the magazine! fantastic job. check out my poem "forgotten domain" and "cumulus prison" and comment? it would mean a lot to me!

on Jul. 18 2011 at 8:07 pm
Cryswithaly SILVER, Kokomo, Indiana
5 articles 1 photo 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was 5 my mother told me the key to life is happiness. My teacher asked me what I wanted to be when I grew up. I wrote down happy. She said I didn't understand the assignment. I told her she didn't understand life.
-John Lennon (Revised)

Amazing like usual:)

Free- GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:51 pm
Free- GOLD, Blllll, Kentucky
14 articles 1 photo 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe in you and I believe in me, and I believe that we are not meaningless."
"What a waste of a perfectly good wrist."

a little awkward at time but still a 4!

you def. have talent!

come look at my stuff:)comments/rate:)


on Jan. 13 2011 at 9:56 am
Annabelle294 SILVER, Branford, Connecticut
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This is really good! I love how the words go hand in hand so well.

on Nov. 21 2010 at 2:01 am
dylanlalala GOLD, Colchester, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"How vain is it to sit down to write when you have not stood up to live?" - Henry David Thoreau

It had an awesome rhythm! It was almost like a song... Great work! But I agree with the others- more meaning!

on May. 7 2010 at 6:52 pm
sharpquill DIAMOND, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"There are all kinds of courage. It takes a great deal of bravery to stand up to our enemies, but just as much to stand up to our friends." - Albus Dumbledore in Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone

I like the pattern and the concept but it seems a bit scattered in terms of meaning...Maybe clean it up and decide what you're trying to say

on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:53 pm
poemlover BRONZE, Hadley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
i get the best feeling in the world when you say hi to me or even smile because i know for a second that i've crossed your mind

it could use some work but keep it up and you'll get it. good work

on Apr. 10 2009 at 12:42 am
Babybluelove1 SILVER, Clyde, Texas
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i like the world choice girl

ashboo said...
on Aug. 23 2008 at 12:34 am
i liked it but how is it called go girl when it dont even say go girl but it was ehhy ok ;)

balla said...
on Aug. 16 2008 at 9:55 pm
I think this article really stands out but i think that you need to like put more meaning to it. I think your meaning should come right after that last part but over all this article is awesome

PrincessPoet said...
on Aug. 12 2008 at 10:04 pm
I like the way you worded it and how oher girls can read and relate. ;) Luv'd it!




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