The Sentiment MAG

By Danielle Zigon, Carmel, IN

Lightly tapping across the floor
Paws with nails too long,
Whispering by a couch on fours
Delicate hair rubbed wrong;

Silently preparing to strike
Joints are cracked and bowed,
Heaving atop cushions alike
Bright hazel eyes aglow;

Bristly licking a familiar face
Tongue is coarse to skin,
Purring across a limb with grace
Throat humming with affection.



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eliana924 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2011 at 9:39 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Great imagery, although I think you could have developed the meaning a bit more.

Free- GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:52 pm
Free- GOLD, Blllll, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe in you and I believe in me, and I believe that we are not meaningless."
"What a waste of a perfectly good wrist."

solid 3, but it needed a bit more of a theme but I also kind of liked that it was just a sotry

on Feb. 7 2011 at 9:38 am
alihadley14 GOLD, Glasford, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Truth is, everyone's going to hurt you, you just have to find the ones worth suffering for." -Bob Marley
"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." -Plato

i agree wiff tha dog thing.

on Mar. 11 2010 at 1:55 pm
poemlover BRONZE, Hadley, New York
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Favorite Quote:
i get the best feeling in the world when you say hi to me or even smile because i know for a second that i've crossed your mind

nice imagery you can really vizualize this poem. kudoz

BMMSjr said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 8:51 am
that is a pretty dog


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