Chasing Childhood

kinda like my older sister becuz she got with older guy so ya

 

Cool~ This is great!

its very realteble! can u plx check me out and comment plz? thnx

I have to disagree with everybody when they say that is was perfect. I think that you kind of threw off the rhyme scheme on the last verse, when I read it I kinda felt like someone jabbed me with thier finger. But otherwise keep up the good work! It's better than a lot of my stuff! I love the subject you chose, I think that you did a very good job of making it something relatable and it was very gereally good. I think a lot of us, myself included, can't help but wonder w... (more »)

such a beautiful & powerful poem. i really like this!

so simple and clean, really beautiful message

It reminds me soo much of my life right now. Very good work. I would love  you criticisim in my own work please :)

 

Short But Sweet!

Gosh. Few words, great value. I love this. <3 It kinda got me emotional.

im a fan.

This is a really great poem. It perfectly describes what I feel so often. Kudos!

Fantastic job!!! It's soo true. I often think of this too...I wrote a poem about it, but not as good as this :) Keep writing!!! <3

lovely poem. fantastic writing. don't stop because you have a special gift. :)

Wow!! Really great. I am never let down when I read a new peice of your work! Are are a gifted writer!

Aw! I really like it!

WOW! i loved it!!! absolutely lovet it!

Wow!!! this is great!!! loved it!

Amazing. It really makes you think about how time is passing.

I LOVE this! amazing but sad

Beautiful and yet bittersweet. i love it :)

Absolutely amazing!

i agree with this poem, i miss childhood.

this is so good :)

i love it!!! and can totally relate :)

One of the best poems i've read , its deffinetly something everyone can relate too while growing up i like it alot :)

this is a really good peom. Most people waste their childhood dreaming about the future but once the future comes they are stuck dreaming about the childhood they wish they had

Captured what you were going for really well! i loved it...

wow. this is an amazing piece. i think a lot of people (including myself) can't wait to be "grown up" but the moment they realize they are...they wish for the innocence of childhood again! you did an unbelievable job capturing all the emotion and writing it perfectly :) the flow was amazing. the content was awesome! 5 stars!!! :) check out some of my work if you could, i would really appreciate your opinion. once again...im stunned by this piece! :) BRAVO!

Excellent job! Keep it up...

This piece is amazingly moving!
I think a lot of teens can relate to the fact that they have let their childhood slip away and are trying to grow up too fast. Also, I like the lines " Where are the dress-up clothes?
The trips for ice-cream after school?" because I think it describes the feelings of childhood perfectly and it has an in-depth meaning. I think that you should grasp and welcome childhood because once it is gone, it can never come back. Most people say that ch... (more »)

i love this poem sooooo much im just 16 sooo i think you made me realize that the age i am now should not be wasted on wanting to grow up and just let myself be a kid

This is great poem. Also, I live in Chevy Chase, MD too! It's a small world...

well well well.. good job good job... i was just thinkin how i wish i could be a kid again... wen i was a kid couldn waqit to griw up....

I think we all let childhood slip away from us, wanting to grow up it makes us forget what we should have been, children till time said no more, we decided to grow up to fast and now we want it back, we want our childhood back.

i can rele understand what you mean in this piece...cause well it's like it really is true cause honestly none cares bout life or matter of fact childhood..cause if your a child then all you want to happen is for you to grow up the very next day... so i really like this piece....good job...

That's exactly how I feel! From writer to writer, your poem spoke to me. :)