Kindred Thoughts

August 13, 2010
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A field of shattered dreams, or a field of broken hope
A World undergoing agony, or a world where we can cope
A life we live so violent, or a life where we can love
Being at war with ourselves, or bringing peace from up above
Thoughts can kill mentally, as they come out good or bad
I Dont understand this world, and why it seems so sad
We are all alike, i don't know why we slur
There words of wit so forceful, when these bad times in life stir
It's amazing what surroundings, can do to a persons mind
Thinking about the future, wondering why the the past has left you blind

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c_taylor said...
Oct. 24, 2010 at 10:20 am
I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has meaning! It's pretty and kind of deep also. If you want check out my poem majestic!
Annibonny said...
Sept. 16, 2010 at 11:51 am
AMAZING!! I love the meaning. I sometimes feel the same. Especially in school when people bully or do hurtful things. I also love you comment about the article. Very true.
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