The Wind Whispers "Death" Tonight

The wind whispers "death" tonight
With darkness the skies are veiled
And while you encompass me inside
I see I cannot prevail

The wind whispers "death" tonight
Onto debris I attempt to clutch
But your savage attacks are too much to fight
Weak am I against your icy touch

The wind whispers "death" tonight
As you plummet, explosives sound
And I see my life flash before my eyes
as you drag me deeper down

The wind whispers "death" tonight
I'm finally in your confined embrace
Too late is it now for your anger to subside
for I am off to a better place





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xXBrokenxNightmareXx said...
Sept. 23, 2010 at 7:57 am
Absolutly excellent work....You have ALOT of potential and I love the way you are using it.....You are a great writer and very inspiring.....Keep up the great work!
 
beautifuldisaster18 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:46 pm

Wow! This is really beautiful.

It makes me want to read more of your work. You are very talented. Keep writing!

 
freedomfighter97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 30, 2010 at 12:30 pm
wow.  this is a great poem!  i was captivated and i just couldn't stop reading!  great job. keep writing!!!
 
inksplatters21 said...
Jul. 27, 2010 at 6:54 pm
Wow, awesome work!  I even looked up the picture after reading this, and your poem was a beautiful, elegant description.
 
MercedesXO said...
Jul. 25, 2010 at 8:20 pm
Wow. This is amazing. Extremely touching, and very deep with such simplicity. Excellent job on this:)
 
WritingLoverForever replied...
Jul. 26, 2010 at 1:25 am
Thanks! :)
 
Kathleenmarie said...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 8:57 pm
I love it! Its written and flows very well.. I think it could have alternate meanings.. I wish i could write a poem like this! good work:]
 
WritingLoverForever replied...
Jul. 18, 2010 at 9:49 pm
Oh, I'm sure you could write something like this. :) All writers have the potential to write anything they want. But thanks. Glad you like this poem.
 
SarahJumps said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 7:28 pm
very beautiful and absolutely original. holds a lot of emotion :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
May 9, 2010 at 5:24 pm
oh my! wow, this took my breath away. goodness, what to say?! this is deep beyong any belief. it's a little dark, yet it's just beautiful :) absolutely wonderful!! five stars all the way :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? thanks and PLEASE keep writing. amazing!
 
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