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She Stood in the Corner

March 2, 2010
By nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous


She stood in the corner,
With no one around.
She stood in the corner,
With no one to hound.
She stood in the corner,
With no one to feel.
She stood in the corner,
With no one ever real.
She stood in the corner,
With no one to see.
She stood in the corner,
With no on likely to be.


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Milo! said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 7:01 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.

on Mar. 16 2010 at 2:32 pm
nature-elf PLATINUM, Ramsey, New Jersey
42 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If love is shelter, I'll walk in the rain." -Anonymous

Thanks. Do you have any suggestions to make it better (I love constructive criticism)?

on Mar. 15 2010 at 11:12 pm
enchanted4yu PLATINUM, Calabasas, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon"

This is very touching