You Won't Own Me

February 14, 2010
By RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship


You may have really hurt me
And said you didn't care.
You caused a lot of pain
I'll admit it wasn't fair.
Months have passed
Since I saw you last.
My tears have fallen
And been cast.
I'll never see you
Or so I hope.
It's been so hard
But I'll have to cope.
My blood was drawn
To kill the pain.
I was just a pawn
In your stupid game.
But even though
Your in my thoughts
You wont consume me
I can't be bought.
Someday I will let you go
So I can be free
And let you know
You won't own me.


The author's comments:
I may still remember but I will not be controlled by my thoughts, much less by you.

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on Jul. 19 2011 at 8:44 pm
StrangeJade PLATINUM, Relative Obscurity, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is so beautiful that death has fallen in love with it." - Life of Pi

Very, very good. Stands out a lot from the simpery anthems to boyfriends you see on here. :)

on Aug. 23 2010 at 6:47 pm
amandap PLATINUM, Midlothian, Virginia
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I really like this!!!!!!!!! the defiance at the end is great :)

on Jul. 17 2010 at 6:35 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 154 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

Thank you all sooooo much

on Jul. 16 2010 at 11:22 am
Aquafina BRONZE, Lynn Haven, Florida
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And yet, to say the truth, love and reason rarely keep company now-a-days

I really liked this one and relate to it perfectly. It's really well written♥

on Jul. 15 2010 at 4:23 pm
Just.A.Dream SILVER, Lake Geneva, Wisconsin
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Part of the J7X team. :)

This is amazing, you can really feel the pain you went through when you wrote this. I like how you explained that you wanted to move on, but you couldn't. Keep up the good writing!

on Jun. 21 2010 at 1:13 pm
Serendipity_Pen GOLD, Shakopee, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way of finding the limits of the possible is by going beyond them into the impossible."
~ Arthur C. Clarke
"Better to remain silent and thought a fool then to speak and remove all doubt." ~Abraham Lincoln

Love it!! So true, so true.

on Jun. 17 2010 at 4:14 pm
real_as_can_be101 PLATINUM, Mustang, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
You can love and hate, but which is more irrate? -unknown

one word-amazing

 


on Jun. 14 2010 at 10:41 pm
Pitiful_Anonymous PLATINUM, New Cumberland, West Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"and all you f***ers go beep beep beep in cheap,plastic cars. If It's to dumb to see or say you'll still sing it, and I'll just cue the applause" - Marilyn Manson

This is AMAZING.  Your'e a very talented writer. I look forward to more :)

on Jun. 8 2010 at 4:09 pm
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

this is VERY well written...im usually not one for poetry but i ventured out today and read some! i liked this greatly...full of emotion and truth

on May. 29 2010 at 6:56 am
once_a_redhead SILVER, Lady Lake, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"love is somethin' we all feel even if we don't know that we do!!"

i know how u feel!!! i went through the same thing and have just now letgo!!!

on May. 23 2010 at 9:47 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

:))))))) this was awesome. i loved it!

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on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:13 pm
-Kal- GOLD, Carthage, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Faith sees the invisible, believes the incredible, and recieves the impossible"
-Anonymous

I'm not sure if you're adressing the person we talked about that first night we talked, or if you're adressing me. Whichever way, ouch. If you were adressing me though, you weren't a "pawn," I really did care about you. I hope you know that.

on Feb. 22 2010 at 7:16 pm
Fredwardness SILVER, Romeo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"The stars are blazing like rebel diamonds cut out of the sun" -The Killers (Read My Mind)

"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there." -George Harrison

This just is great. I like how you brought your independence into this. It just was great...-)


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