Simple Love

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I love you in the rain,
when you've left and walked away.
I love you when my hearts in pain,
from those so longed words you wouldn't say.

I love you on the street,
where we used to take our walks.
I love you where we used to meet,
in the woods beneath the stars.

I love you when you don't love me;
though i wish with all might you would.
I love you with everything I have in me,
afraid to open up because you never could.





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Kumanga said...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 11:14 am
i feel that we're like the same bout love.. but maybe everyone is the same bout love, lol maybe not, cuz they take thei love differently, right? heh
 
Bobbi replied...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 12:57 pm
I think everyone some what has the same idea of what it is, but percieve it differently.
 
Bobbi said...
Feb. 26, 2010 at 4:36 pm
awww well thank you. and I'd love to check out your work :)
 
dreamer_believer said...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 12:45 pm
amazing piece :) you captured all the emotions of love pefectly, and you wrote with such emotion! the reader can easily relate :) bravo! would you mind checking out some of my work? i would love your opinion :) keep writing!! i like your style ;)
 
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