I Love You?

February 3, 2010
By lovelytonight93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
lovelytonight93 GOLD, Lyons, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
For now, For ever


Sometimes the words just don’t rise,
sometimes they spit out, and take us both by surprise,
and it makes me wonder all the time,
is there a point to this emotional climb?

“I love you,” such a simple phrase,
has had us both confused for days,
do we mean it? Are we old enough to know?
But I know for sure these feels still grow.

Is there just one love in this life?
Could you one day take me for your wife?
Why am I left so confused?
Will I be left just feeling used?


The author's comments:
confusion is always fun, ya know...

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on May. 4 2011 at 5:27 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

wow! i can realte :) i think a lot of teenagers have these same questions when thinking of "true love". you did a great job portraying all that emotion :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? i'd love the feedback. keep writing, you're great! :)

on Jan. 11 2011 at 8:06 pm
sunnyhunny PLATINUM, Litchfield, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."
-Ghandi

I know just what you mean here.  Great poem!


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