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I Love You?

Sometimes the words just don’t rise,
sometimes they spit out, and take us both by surprise,
and it makes me wonder all the time,
is there a point to this emotional climb?

“I love you,” such a simple phrase,
has had us both confused for days,
do we mean it? Are we old enough to know?
But I know for sure these feels still grow.

Is there just one love in this life?
Could you one day take me for your wife?
Why am I left so confused?
Will I be left just feeling used?



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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 4, 2011 at 5:27 pm:
wow! i can realte :) i think a lot of teenagers have these same questions when thinking of "true love". you did a great job portraying all that emotion :) would you mind commenting on some of my work? i'd love the feedback. keep writing, you're great! :)
 
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sunnyhunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 8:06 pm:
I know just what you mean here.  Great poem!
 
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