Forever Mine

December 9, 2009
By Anonymous

I love the way you look at me,
Your eyes are so beautiful and blue.
I love it when I kiss you,
Your lips so soft and smooth.

I love how you make me happy,
With looks that show you care.
I love when you say, “I Love You,”
I know you’ll always be there.

I love your astounding beauty,
With which no one can compare.
I love it when I’m with you,
I can’t help myself but stare.

I love wrapping my arms around you,
And the chills you send down my spine.
I love that you are with me,
And you will be forever mine.

The author's comments:
I wrote this for the girl of my dreams as part of a birthday gift. I was crazy in love, but then she broke my heart.

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This article has 2 comments.

on Jan. 6 2010 at 9:44 am
20hiscaiti09 GOLD, Sperryville, Virginia
11 articles 3 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I love you more"

So sorry she broke your heart.You seem like a really nice guy, she'll regret it later.

Mitch SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 8:41 pm
Mitch SILVER, Newcastle, California
6 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't do drugs, don't have unprotected sex, and don't be violent. Leave that to me.

Well man, I'm sorry she broke your heart. Couple years from now she'l be in the bookstore with her 5 kids and she will see your name on the cover of a poetry book. And her kids will want to get it. I have not read a poem today with such meter as yours. You are right on. Keep writing kid, if it doesn't kill you, it makes you stronger.


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