Shade

December 3, 2009
By zelda712 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
zelda712 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Through Power, I gain Victory through Victory, My Chains are broken.......


I’ll give you a warning, well known warning of the Shade
in the Blackburn forest.
I saw a Shade, a while ago so divine in every way.
Hair like a flame, look into his eyes and you may never be the same.
Ah, how cunning and loathsome, the hunt is his favorite game to play.

Spirits devour his soul as dark as his eyes,
His anger and temper is as red as his magnificent hair.
Fast and swift his pace never lessens,
Steals the heart of every maiden so fair.

For there is a reason he lives in the Blackburn forest,
It’s spooky and isolated except for the monsters of the night.
He lives in a castle where screams and blood on walls are common.
Only the elves dare to venture out and fight!!!!!

I told you, I warned you of the Shade.
Never tangle with the supernatural, fragile human,
For this nightmare will never fade.
So live your life with out regret for going into the Blackburn forest.


The author's comments:
I wrote this for my poetry project in the 7th grade, and I've always thought that it is one of my most favorite poetry pieces. I hope you enjoy it! (my inspiration came when I read the book Eragon, the shade)

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on Feb. 8 2010 at 12:56 pm
zelda712 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Through Power, I gain Victory through Victory, My Chains are broken.......

Thanks, dude I tried like 4 times 2 have a Link username, but all my favorite numbers were taken! oh well,......once again thanks. By the way I like posting more stuff on devianart!

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on Feb. 5 2010 at 3:11 pm
grasslova GOLD, Highland, Utah
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ha haha, nice! :D but wait, problemo: nobody else has commented on it! No one but you, lol. I'll help you out with that.

DUDE!!! this is owesome!! you are a crazy sauce amazing writer to be writing something this pro at such a tender age. Seventh grade? Oh baybee, you should be proud! This is magnificent! Simply marvelous! Keep up the good work--you are an inspiring writer. Thank you for your work. ;) contact me when you get famous! **double pat on back** xoxoxo

p.s. LOVE your screen name! :) though I myself am more of a Link lover. <3 adios my friend!

on Dec. 25 2009 at 3:26 pm
zelda712 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Through Power, I gain Victory through Victory, My Chains are broken.......

That's amazing......wait I wrote it? *pats on my back*


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