Alone

December 2, 2009
By Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
Aro_To_The_Heart PLATINUM, Mandeville, Louisiana
47 articles 7 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
Why is it that, as a culture, we are more comfortable seeing two men holding guns than hands?

-Ernest Gaines.


Alone in this world
And hurt by love
There is a friend
That I have been thinking of

My heart goes out to her
I feel her suffering and grief
I wish I could comfort her
And give her some relief

She is tormented by a past
That just won’t leave
Day and night
With no reprieve

Her spirit is strong
But flesh can be weak
I pray she finds the solace
That she does seek

But most of all I pray
That her past will let her go
So once again she will feel love
And that love, through her, will flow...


The author's comments:
Sometimes even the strongest of us may fall. For the girl I've been thinking of forever and a day, this goes out to you.

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on Dec. 24 2009 at 4:33 pm
RedvinesWTHCantTheyDo GOLD, Zephyrhills, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"You make one more comment like that I will wrap you in a tortilla shell and eat you as a snack, maybe with some nice pico de gillo."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship
"If you don't die for something, I'll kill you for nothing."~ Lauren Lopez in Starship

I can't even think of words to describe this. I love it. the flow is magnificent, and i can feel the emotion

NotThatGirl said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 12:56 pm
Oh, I really love this!


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