You're Loves Failure

August 27, 2009
If one single tear fell
and your heart was broken
could you tell?
Or am i just forgotten?

Do you still have feelings?
No not for me..., at all?
is your mind realing?
this damned world will fall!

The memories...
No the lies
your loves' parodies
written in my sighs.

the ink..
letters made from you blood
so sink
to your grave of mud!

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IMAdreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 15, 2012 at 9:04 pm
Wow!! emotional, i like it a lot! really nice work. will u please read  rate  and  comment on my work/articles? thxz
Dudet95 said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 11:18 am
Aw this is beautful.:') It made me want to cry when I finished it.The broken heart feel to this is extremely sad, but It is amazing.You catpured the feel to it very well.You word choices are very well done and It felt much more like a song to me for some reason:)I can almost hear the tune lol
Bnubbs said...
Nov. 2, 2010 at 10:05 pm
i kno exactly what your saying here. great poem  keep writing please!
Meghan said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 7:05 pm
Great poem!
LunaWingsFlyAway replied...
Sept. 21, 2010 at 8:18 pm
yeahhhh....let them people sink...for breeaking hearts...ilove this poem
girlydancer1100 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 7:17 pm
I love this, it's so beautiful!
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