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I wish I could read your mind.
To see what you have behind,
To see all the secrets you hide,
To see how you really feel inside.



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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 10:46 am
I didn't really connect with this Poem. I felt like each line was saying the same thing, and since its really short that makes it redundant. Just my opinion.
 
nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 4:53 pm
Short, sweet and to the point.  Could be better, but is by no means bad.
 
Milo! said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:01 pm
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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