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I wish I could read your mind.
To see what you have behind,
To see all the secrets you hide,
To see how you really feel inside.



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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 10:46 am:
I didn't really connect with this Poem. I felt like each line was saying the same thing, and since its really short that makes it redundant. Just my opinion.
 
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nickykens This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 4:53 pm:
Short, sweet and to the point.  Could be better, but is by no means bad.
 
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Milo! said...
Apr. 9, 2010 at 8:01 pm:
What a great piece. It’s so understandable. You made it really easy to see where you’re coming from. I hope you keep writing, because this is really good. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.
 
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