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My heart has splintered,
each fracture carved by the love
I felt for you.
When I see you in her arms,
each one deepens

How come the pain
is so strong
when I knew you were never mine?

How come every time
I see her in your arms,
my heart fills with envy?

The pain, the pain so strong
that tears away my heart,
it is unbearable,
yet every time I see your smile,
I forget
and I want to see it again
and again.

But when I'm alone,
I remember,
and the pain grows stronger
and stronger,
a wave that cannot be stopped.

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keyboard_musican said...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 10:17 am:
hey i love this i can really connect u r amazing
Alik_=) replied...
Sept. 3, 2009 at 8:21 pm :
thank you! I can see a lot of revisions now that its been a while since I wrote it, but Im glad it served its purpose by making you feel something :D
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Alison K. said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 9:53 pm:
lol, no, I didn't feel it first hand. it was inspired by a friend, she was having a hard time. thanks so much! You have no idea how much it means when people say these types of things! :)
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GirlFromRochester said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 12:36 pm:
how are you sooo good??
and how in the heck did you write such a deep poem without feeling that same emotion first hand? or maybe you which case, im sorry!!
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