My Bittersweet Memories

April 5, 2009
By ZoeR. GOLD, Redlands, California
ZoeR. GOLD, Redlands, California
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i trembled
as he held me
as i pressed against him
inhaling
his sweet sent

his warm hands
on my back,
in my hair,
on my face.

and my lips
and his
moving together
urgent,
demanding,
HUNGRY



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ZoeR. GOLD said...
on Nov. 15 2009 at 10:06 am
ZoeR. GOLD, Redlands, California
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hey, thanks. could u comment on some of my other work too?? id love your feedback <3

on Nov. 9 2009 at 4:02 pm
writerxchicx SILVER, Wyalusing, Pennsylvania
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i love it! great job!




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