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I often lay on rooftops
Disect the pale white moon
I let my mind drift far away
In the hour that mirrors noon
I swear for love, for god, for truth
Her hand is what I feel
I turn my head and there I see
My dream is something real
We lay and laugh for hours there
I find comfort in her eyes
She reminds me of a flowers bloom
Severing her earthly ties
I lift her heart and breath her breath
Our hearts together twirled
Sometimes I think a flower here
Can outweigh all the world.



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Fifteen_Roses This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 22, 2012 at 9:14 pm:
I enjoy your writing a lot. It's very personal yet very relaxed. Please keep it up :)
 
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sleeplessdreamer said...
Jun. 29, 2010 at 2:41 pm:

I really like it. It's different but sweet. The rhyming isn't forced but helps with the flow. Nicely done.

Check out my work if you ever get the chance!

 
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nyc.idealist said...
Jan. 31, 2010 at 5:17 pm:
Love it Ryan, very beautiful. I remember last year in Darland's class when this got posted. Repsresent hastings!!
 
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AmnyR said...
Jan. 25, 2010 at 9:31 pm:
this is so beautiful that i want to cry! wow, you are amazing!!! please post more i will definatley read it! wow i really love this piece
 
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MeaganDear said...
Aug. 7, 2009 at 1:36 am:
this is so, so beautiful.
 
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