March 22, 2009
By Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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Do you see the mock?
Do you see the shame?
Do you see the pain,
bleeding through the eyes?

Do you hear the sadness?
Do you hear the hope?
Do you heat the tenderness,
in my voice?

For your eyes are dim,
you ears are clogged,
no indication of what is left.
Reject me,
accept me,
give me yes,
give me no.
Give me a sign,
that you can see.

If I fall,
will you catch?
If i miss-spell,
will you correct?
Wil you tell if I'm wrong or right
or will you let me fall at sight?
Are those tears for me,
or from you blinding sympathy?

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Sunshineyday said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 7:55 pm
good poem. I like it

on Sep. 24 2009 at 11:31 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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teenink made it hard for me to see all your new articles. can you give me names! oh, and 1,000 congratz on being published! i'm so very exited for you! i saw your fictional story in the new magazine, and i started freaking out and jumping up and down, lolz

Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:29 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

Wow, that's deep. I love it! I haven't been on for a while because of injudicious grounding, so all the stuff I wrote during that time is pending. I see you added lots of new stuff too! Keep Writing!!!!!!!!

-Blessed Be!



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