March 22, 2009
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Do you see the mock?
Do you see the shame?
Do you see the pain,
bleeding through the eyes?

Do you hear the sadness?
Do you hear the hope?
Do you heat the tenderness,
in my voice?

For your eyes are dim,
you ears are clogged,
no indication of what is left.
Reject me,
accept me,
give me yes,
give me no.
Give me a sign,
that you can see.

If I fall,
will you catch?
If i miss-spell,
will you correct?
Wil you tell if I'm wrong or right
or will you let me fall at sight?
Are those tears for me,
or from you blinding sympathy?

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Sunshineyday said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 7:55 pm
good poem. I like it
Zero_K This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 6:29 pm
Wow, that's deep. I love it! I haven't been on for a while because of injudicious grounding, so all the stuff I wrote during that time is pending. I see you added lots of new stuff too! Keep Writing!!!!!!!!
-Blessed Be!
Electricity This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 11:31 pm
teenink made it hard for me to see all your new articles. can you give me names! oh, and 1,000 congratz on being published! i'm so very exited for you! i saw your fictional story in the new magazine, and i started freaking out and jumping up and down, lolz
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