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The Kids That I Know

May 15, 2017
By RyanGarris7 BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
RyanGarris7 BRONZE, Thornton, Colorado
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The kids that I know
can be very strange
but I dont know
how hey could ever change

The kids that I know
take more thn they need
and they don't admit that they are full of greed
but watching them them fight over greed
is truely a show

The kids that I know
cn be very rude
but they can still be nice
when they want to

The kids that I know
could be your greatest enemy
and you best friend


The author's comments:

          I didn't know what to write at first until one day, I
was sitting outside watching my friends playing sports
or other types of games. I saw how they played and the
idea was triggered. This poem is not only an idea but
is real within my group of friends.
          The rhyme scheme of my poem is "A-B-A-B
A-C-C-C-A A-D-E-F A-G-H." The first stanza is the
"A-B-A-B" rhyme pattern that was not put there on
purpose. I put it there when I couldn't think of
what to add next and came back to my poem. I
added it before reading the first three lines of
my poem. With the next stanzas, I tried to think
of a way thay I could a rhyme pattern in, but I
couldn't think of one.


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