Broken Persona

March 20, 2009
By Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad


In our lives, friends become distant memories that disappear into the abyss that is the darkness in our hearts. The rainbow, full of color, that is life becomes black and white. As this occurs we lose ourselves trying to remember who we once were. This unfortunately is when we are so far in the darkness there is literally no return, it's really unfortunate for those who are lost.


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on Oct. 9 2009 at 7:13 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

alrite I'll def get on that

on Oct. 9 2009 at 7:21 am
elvinchangling55 SILVER, Malverne, New York
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totally!! could u please check out my poem 'otherwhere'. id love to get an opinion

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:24 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

Thx, I guess this means I'm doing sumthin rite

on Oct. 8 2009 at 12:53 pm
elvinchangling55 SILVER, Malverne, New York
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i love it!! i totally understand what u mean by losing ourselves trying to find out what we once were. great job!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 8:07 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

Good cause it'll knock ur sox off

on Oct. 7 2009 at 6:17 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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ok gud cuz im xcited 2 see what u wrote nxt!

on Oct. 6 2009 at 6:54 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

Thx. I've written a lot however, it takes forever for them to approve my work and I have a good amount. But I will be posting more.

on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:15 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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oh, and i forgot... the title is cool, too :D

on Oct. 6 2009 at 9:13 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
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thanks for ur post in my thread!

wow!!!!! this is so good!!!! I love how it's almost like a paragraph rather than a poem... i think it's so creative with the formatting! i also love your imagry! i think it's really hard to find good descriptions in poetry, and you managed! the feeling is also so realistic... when are you gonna write more?! u have a talent, man, so KEEP WRITING!!!!!!

Jc said...
on May. 19 2009 at 5:18 am
Good job! I thought it waz great!

on Apr. 20 2009 at 3:31 am
Cassie PLATINUM, Delisle, Other
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VERY GOOD! I LOVE IT!


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