The Better Half of Me

March 11, 2009
By Revenge BRONZE, Washington, New Jersey
Revenge BRONZE, Washington, New Jersey
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Hey boy whatcha doin' up so late?
I have you on my mind and I can't shake you out.
How do you feel when I get butterflies and shivers down my neck?
How do you know when to chanllange me and get me so confused?
It's like your in my head just driving me insane.
The crazy things you make me do.
All the fun I see in you.
I'm a love induced mess, because it's what you do that keeps me on my toes.


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on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:23 pm
RougePhotography SILVER, Alto, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Why would I want you to sweep me off my feet? You'll probably drop me sooner or later."

Nice! It's catchy and fun to read. I like this a lot! One thing though:

"It's like your in my head just driving me insane."

I think it should be either "you're" or "you are". Just thought I'd point that out. Great job!




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