Naked and Exposed

March 11, 2009
By Looking4Alaskax BRONZE, Mayfield Village, Ohio
Looking4Alaskax BRONZE, Mayfield Village, Ohio
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I stand in front of you today
Naked and exposed
You can see everything
Tried to hide while clothed;
The never told secrets
Hidden from all fears
The way I feel about myself
But you are nowhere near
Your proclaim your strength to all
I know how weak you feel
Broken up inside
Your heart will never heal

The author's comments:
This poem is like two kids break up because something unspeakable happened between them and the girl isn't hiding how she feels about them breaking up, but the boy tries to hide pretending he doesn't care about her when he does, a lot. The girl is like calling him out; she doesn't care what people say about her because she won't deny that she loved him and is hurt, and she's also saying she knows for a fact how he feels even if he tries to cover it up.

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on Mar. 23 2009 at 3:13 pm
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