Portrait

Free my feet of rusted fetters,
Transform in my hand a sword from a scar.
Erase from my eyes the foggy mist
And when you look at me I can hold your gaze.

Sketch the way for my heart's liberation
Because only your pencil can form my whole.





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Meli1 said...
May 9, 2009 at 7:57 pm
OMG!! THAT WAS INCREDIBLE. !!
 
Olivia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 3:56 pm
Thank you! :)
 
theoobleck This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 16, 2009 at 4:26 pm
Very good! Very direct and meaningful.
 
Olivia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 3:58 pm
Thanks! I appreciate it!
 
FreakAlmighty411 said...
Mar. 27, 2009 at 9:59 pm
very good! Short and leaves you in thought!! :D
 
Olivia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 15, 2009 at 3:58 pm
(: Thanks!
 
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