Loved or hated

November 2, 2016
By definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."


(read from top to bottom)

I am hated
Never again will I say that
I have been loved my whole life
I’m not alone;
Im abandoned
Never will I accept it when you say that
You will stick with me
And
Protect me
Even though I will always protect you, you’ll
Leave me
You’ll never
Love me completely.

(now read from bottom to top)


The author's comments:

This is a reverse poem. You read it one way, then you read it the other way. 


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on Nov. 14 2016 at 1:27 pm
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."

Thank you. I did enjoy that. You should try to write your own. I think you'd write an amazing reverse poem, given what I've already read of your work. I will try to spice it up as much as I can. And again, thank you.

on Nov. 14 2016 at 1:17 pm
emmichaels SILVER, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"A book is a frigate."
Emily Dickinson

Loved or hated Image Credit: Beth S., Marblehead, MA The author's comments: Quotes This is a reverse poem. You read it one way, then you read it the other way. Quotes (read from top to bottom) I am despised Never again will I say that I have been loved my entire life I’m not alone; I'm abandoned I never will accept your words You will stay by my side And Protect me As I will always protect you Leave me You’ll never Love me completely. (now read from bottom to top) (I am addicted to this poem, I've never seen a reverse poem surprisingly! I thought perhaps you'd enjoy to see the changes I'd personally make and correct instead of simply having me tell you. Other than the minor changes and edits, it is fabulous. Keep what you are doing, you are an amazing writer!)

on Nov. 10 2016 at 1:16 pm
definitionoflife GOLD, Sheridan, Wyoming
12 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"do or do not. There is no try."
"Normality is a paved road. It's comfortable to walk, but no flowers grow on it."

Thank you. I will keep that in mind

Crimgym GOLD said...
on Nov. 9 2016 at 11:05 pm
Crimgym GOLD, Townley, Alabama
11 articles 7 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Magic is real. You just have to know where to find it." -unknown

This is an amazing poem! I love the layout of it! The only thing I would suggest, is using some more sophisticated words, such as despise instead of hate. Otherwise, this poem is very good.




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