blue

February 26, 2009
By Mouctika P BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
Mouctika P BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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A blue flower
In a field of pink
Trying to be quiet
To be unnoticed
But in doing so
Covering up everything
That makes it what it is
Ignorant of itself
Focusing on others
Watching them
Studying them
To become another one
Of them
Untapped potential
Constantly hidden
Beauty worthy of envy
Always smothered
Happiness beyond belief
On the brink of disappearance
All because of one flower
That one ignorant conformist flower
The only beautiful blue flower
In a field of pink.


The author's comments:
The real poem is longer. But I lost that. I hope you like my reflection on being a standout new kid-or at least, the part I memorized. :)

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on Apr. 16 2009 at 9:30 pm
Mouctika P BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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Thanks Martini!!! :)

on Apr. 16 2009 at 2:05 am
ms00001 PLATINUM, Carrollton, Texas
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That was the poem you read in leap! I like it two, very good imaging and description of the theme (i know i sound like mrs sacone, but it seriously really really good!)



good choice of words too

on Apr. 4 2009 at 8:39 pm
Mouctika P BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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Thanks, Madison_R. I really appreciate it. I just wish I could find the real one.... it's better than this one.

Madison_R said...
on Mar. 28 2009 at 11:33 pm
Madison_R, Carrollton, Texas
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I love the message of this poem. Good job.


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