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Over and Over, again and again
All I can do is think about him.
Butterflies flutter, heart skips a beat.
Feels like I'm floating, knees become week.
I want him to hold me, I long for his kiss.
Nothing compares to these feelings of bliss.
He makes me smile, like no one else does,
I can't help but to think I'm falling in love.



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CassieSherman14This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2010 at 8:43 pm:
Awww... how cute. That was great. You are great at writing, I have read every piece of your writing, and I think you should keep writing! Great job!
 
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smartypantsscorpio22 said...
Apr. 23, 2010 at 6:23 pm:
Short, simple, and to the point. I love it! Your beat is interesting, but I really do like it.
 
Sarbear This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
May 15, 2010 at 8:14 pm :

this is so cute, very simple but says a lot GREAT JOB!!

 

 
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