That's It

February 20, 2009
By s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
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I just don't understand
The concept of which you speak
Because every time you look into my eyes
I look away
The few seconds I take to look back seem endlessly filled with words
Yet none are transferred
But the thing I always see when I look back into your eyes
Is the hollow hole you've made of me
And it expands more and more every day
Because as I surface more to you
I drown from reality
I can see what its doing to me
But I can't stop it
Because maybe its not meant to be stopped
But after I think that
I start to think about the first day we met
How you told me I was beautiful like a play acted out
Center stage
But the curtain falls eventually
And I realize maybe it wasn't meant to be started

The author's comments:
People lose themselves.

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on Mar. 18 2010 at 11:16 am
s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
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I'm sorry I just saw this comment MONTHS later, but thanks! haha and es, I like to tie different parts of m poetry to the ending. :)

on Nov. 12 2009 at 12:20 pm
AndThisIsReal PLATINUM, Broadalbin, New York
31 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dans chaque fil il y a un debut.

I like how your poems come full circle.

I'm not sure if you know what I mean by that, but its another very good poem.

Kind of sound like something I'd write it a way.

Feel free to check out my writing some time if you'd like. :D


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