Fireflies

February 11, 2009
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Rang with crickets,
dipping white patterns
in the dark, glowing
like moon light, on and
off glowing like moon
light yellow flashlights,
Moon light under water, moon
light in the joy of green and
gold twilight poured into the
night around the moon. They
dance like stars, swarms
of tears in the eyes, yet
a smile comes into view.





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lovehate29 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 19, 2009 at 3:25 pm
This is very good. Such a beautiful image it creates.
 
Anonymous This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 7, 2009 at 3:35 am
wow. i love this. i had to read it 3 times to finally understand all of it, which is a good thing. the tears part with a smile.. wow. i want your words!
 
cariberry24 said...
Mar. 3, 2009 at 2:21 am
This poem is so full of imagery, I feel like I am there experiencing it! Great job, keep writing!
 
p8ntgirl2028 said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 1:17 am
Bridget you are overflowing with talent! So happy you shared this with me! I am sending this to everyone I know right now!

Congratulations!!!
 
dancinxodior said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 12:29 am
really gooddd bridget!!
 
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