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silly human.

i lay here and i hear your heartbeat
your just another human being like me
and were nothing special
we both just feel
and hurt
and breathe
but i feel connected
with my heart placed against yours
and i dont know why
and why when our lips touch
when these sensitive body parts meet
do i feel my heart race
it flutters
we are mere machienes
we are programed into time
we can explain everything
but please wont you riddle me this
our nerves make us feel pain
we release endorphins that make us happy
a chemical unbalance makes us sad
or crazy
but what is this
is this some kind of chemical reaction in my brain?
making me care about YOU more than MYSELF?
what is this disease?
oh,
its called love





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HopelessWritter said...
Feb. 28, 2009 at 4:50 am
Great!! i like how you just flowed. its well written as well.
 
Perfectionist47 said...
Feb. 18, 2009 at 11:44 pm
That is so sweet. Very very well written, I like how you don't capitalize your i's. I like the majority of your work. Keep writing! compliment or criticize my work at- TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/83793/To-Become/ Thanks for sharing your work!
 
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