Free at Last

January 28, 2009
By J.PMargaret BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
J.PMargaret BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

I stared as the formidable men walked by, I could see the drive and the stars in their eyes. Holding our flag, red, white, and blue. Assured the onlookers the rumors were true. Now no more fear for the explosive contraptions. No fear for death or war-torn reactions. The rythym of their footsteps was reassuring, this reunion was far from boring. Our enemies we've now befriended. One man stood and said, "The war has ended."


The author's comments:
The war in Iraq has inspired me to write this piece. I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I have writing it.

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on Feb. 24 2009 at 10:41 pm
J.PMargaret BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments
thnx i wrote it 4 english we had to use our vocab words.

moonbeam said...
on Feb. 16 2009 at 2:22 pm
Good use of vocabulary, deep stuff, I like it.

on Feb. 15 2009 at 12:28 am
J.PMargaret BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments
Hi, I am J.P M. : ] I would really appriciate comments....thnx


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