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January 29, 2009
By schoentastic GOLD, Brookline, New Hampshire
schoentastic GOLD, Brookline, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"I say, it's in the reach of my arms, the span of my hips, the stride of my step, the curl of my lips. I'm a woman, phenomenally. Phenomenal woman, that's me." -Maya Angelou


The sun drips in like butterscotch
Through the sapphire-chipped window frames.
Cat litter is shoved in the carpet,
And small ants uncover the leftover tofu
Underneath the refrigerator.
On the futon,
He sits with one foot on the cat,
And the other on today's newspaper.
My fingers skim the remote,
Searching for something to watch.
In the room across from the kitchen,
She sleeps with her curvy
Scarlet hair
Wrapping around the freckles on her back,
While out in the living room
Our fingertips are carved around
Filters and cups of stale coffee.
Drops of liquid fall from the ceiling
From last night's storm
And hit the piano keys in my nephew's room.
I throw the remote at him
But he ignores my request.
He kicks the cat out of his space,
Rolls his cigarettes up his left white sleeve
On his shoulder,
Then shoves his wallet
In the back pocket of his Billy Joel jeans.
And as he's lacing up his black combat boots,
And as I'm tracing the lines of my hand,
He says
I'm leaving.
And when she woke,
Her mouth was stained plum,
And for the first time in a long time,
She smiled.



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on Nov. 22 2009 at 5:57 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

your welcome! u deserve to have compliments on such good writing. ;)

on Nov. 22 2009 at 5:34 pm
schoentastic GOLD, Brookline, New Hampshire
10 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I say, it's in the reach of my arms, the span of my hips, the stride of my step, the curl of my lips. I'm a woman, phenomenally. Phenomenal woman, that's me." -Maya Angelou

Thank you so much!

on Nov. 8 2009 at 12:12 pm
TheRealAriel1995 PLATINUM, Highland Village, Texas
30 articles 6 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See in what peace a Christian can die." - Joseph Addison
"How come everyone will come to your funeral, but nobody will come see you when you are living?"

this is very well written! nice descripitvie words! :)