if you love me

January 25, 2009
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If you love me
let me fall
dont raise my hopes
so high and tall
and when you notice
I'm not all that great
you would have sealed
my predicted fate
If you love me
let me down
so i dont expect
to swim not drown
sooner or later
I'll hit the ground
just to again
be found
by someone like you
who'll make me belive
as if happiness is
something we can achive
so if you dont plan
to catch mytears
help me to
face my fears
just let me fall
in to the sea
if you dont
plan to catch me





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gpa said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 7:06 pm
Oh Lena, your poetry reaches beyond amateur poetry. Now you are published in teen ink. Lets get all of your poetry and find a publisher. I think you would be a hit.
 
Elizabeth Courtney said...
Mar. 19, 2009 at 12:16 pm
omg i love this one!!! you should def. write more

love you
 
JBParker said...
Feb. 16, 2009 at 7:17 pm
u r a really good writer i was not expecting that at all
 
becca baby said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 1:25 pm
i loved it... you did an amazing job... hope to read more of your stuff soon... ;)
 
sweetpeazzz said...
Feb. 3, 2009 at 1:15 pm
i love it:)
your a great writer lena
 
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