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Need Love?

December 31, 2008
By carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
carijoy SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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See it but never feel it.
Get close, only to push it away.
“Don’t know what you’ve got til it’s gone”
Epitome of my life.
What is wrong with me?
What makes me so un-lovable?
Can someone remove this defective sign from my forehead,
And replace it with a kiss.
I want more than mediocre.
I want someone to miss.
Do I ask for too much?
Are my requirements unachievable?
My heart remains unconquered, unattained.
I’m tired of fairy tale endings,
Silly thoughts put in my head by unrealistic, but hopelessly believable movies.
They are all the same.
Girl meets boy. Girl messes it up. Boy forgives girl.
Happily Ever After.
At least they let on that relationships have problems.
I want raw, unrelenting love.
The real deal.
No movie, novel, or episode of “Sex and the City” could ever touch.
Left alone, drowning in thoughts,
Who else in the world could need love,
Like I need love?



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on Nov. 9 2010 at 8:07 pm
Izabella Sheldon, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
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Izabella-aka-izzy-aka-bella-aka-aly is my name so deal wit it sucka!!!!!

on Nov. 9 2010 at 6:58 pm
Athena19 SILVER, Central Point, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
'Love people. Cook them tasty food.' -Penzey's Spices

same here!

on Nov. 9 2010 at 5:37 pm
Cathys26 BRONZE, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
" a diamond is not just crystal in form it is a very little precious piece of beauty put together just like ones friendship'

This me all over.

And your poem is lovely.


on Nov. 9 2010 at 1:18 pm
marmar18 BRONZE, Warren, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
doesnt matter how many breathes you take but how many moments take your breath away.

i like it.

on Nov. 9 2010 at 1:16 pm
FisherKing BRONZE, Warren, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Dont got one:D

Really like this yo(:

on Nov. 9 2010 at 9:37 am
fadingaway1324 SILVER, Latrobe, Pennsylvania
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i enjoyed it. :) good luck on the love thing.

on Nov. 6 2010 at 6:39 pm
pencilsFORhands SILVER, Boston, Massachusetts
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wow.. story of my life :)

on Nov. 5 2010 at 1:28 pm
BeautifulSkye PLATINUM, Mansfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
you cant live with them... you cant live without them.

i love this and i can really relate... i hope you find that love...

on Nov. 3 2010 at 7:33 pm
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

this seems so raw and from the heart in the best sense. i think its partly the media that sets us up to think only of things and money and then we feel empty because we are measuring ourselves in thing and money and have no room for love. thanks for writing such a great poem

on Nov. 3 2010 at 7:29 pm
wind.and.rain.again BRONZE, Amherst, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"What is it you wish to do with your one wild and precious life?" Mary Oliver

i cant imagine what your going through right now if you are still in this situation, but i sincerely hope that you find love somewhere out there in the world. i know its corny but it always comes if u let it

Rox18 SILVER said...
on Oct. 25 2010 at 5:17 pm
Rox18 SILVER, Riverside, California
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liked this poem. you can tell this came straight from the honest heart. "epitome of my life" perfect words to desribe. awesome poem:]

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on Oct. 24 2010 at 9:31 pm
-Rain- GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Life is Beautiful - (English)
La vie est belle - (French)

I compeltely feel you here. I was recently kicked out of my house. Everything I had taken awaay by my own parents. Shown no love or mercey, just thrown into the unforgiveing world with nothing ant the age of 17. There is no love for me.

on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:00 pm
Michelle24 GOLD, Riverwoods, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."-Dr. Seuss

"Life is not measured by the breaths we take but by the moments that take our breath away."-Unknown

This is my life in poetry form. Beautiful and hitting every point that I'm sure a ton of us feel. I love it. 100%!

on Oct. 18 2010 at 7:52 pm
freebird SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
i celebrate myself

amen. this is me in poetry form, you really connected with the readers! thank you for this, and amazing work.

victoria said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 12:05 pm
that is wrighit a grl needs love and u r righit

mrzx.daniels said...
on Oct. 18 2010 at 12:02 pm
i kno thats right cause i am in luv wit someone know and we got alot of hataz out hur so try to keep yo man

on Oct. 17 2010 at 12:07 am
fob-fan5 SILVER, Brockon, Ma, Massachusetts
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i can really connect with this because i've felt this hurt in fact i am right now :( good luke great writing

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on Oct. 15 2010 at 1:45 am
Natarita GOLD, Chandler, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
I am good, but not an angel. I do sin, but am not the devil. I am pretty but not beautiful. I have friends but am not the peacemaker. I am just a small girl in a big world trying to find someone to love.

I would have to say quite moving, it's good to know someone else longs for love. you think it would be simple, right? I really like this piece :)

on Oct. 14 2010 at 1:58 pm
Carnisha_Tassin BRONZE, New Orleans, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Nooo Huh?" "Down Bad" "

I like it. I can really relate to it.

on Oct. 13 2010 at 12:19 pm
TimmothyMark GOLD, Hertford, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I can do all things through Christ who stregthens me." - Phillipians 4:13

I know how you feel man. Women dislike me only because I'm not cute. They pass right on by the fact that I'm faithful, loving, straight A student, and one of the friendliest people you'll ever meet. They seem to only care about his looks.