Confessions Of A Teenage Heartbreak

December 29, 2008
By Jaelyne Castillo, Freeport, NY, NY

A rule that cannot be controlled. Something that can be hot and cold. It is worth crying your eyes out and it's worth finding the lies out. And you feel so confused, as if you did something wrong. Because the short time you had together, felt so long. When you think you're living happily, you find out that you two can never be. Then he tells you he just wants to relax, so you start to become eternally sad. It's because you've been hit so hard and it pains you so bad. He ignores your texts, which took you so long to write. But you fell so hard. You can't put up a fight. So babe, this is for you. I hope you know who you are. Because no matter what, you'll always be my shining star.

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This article has 2 comments.

blah123x3 said...
on Jan. 12 2009 at 12:56 am
This is amazing. I love it .

lanmacx3 said...
on Jan. 12 2009 at 12:28 am
iloveeyou jaee and your poem is insanee, all your poems are amazing i have seen a few i love you

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