Ice Has Never Felt This Cold

December 6, 2008
By ilu4everx97 BRONZE, Gouldsboro, Pennsylvania
ilu4everx97 BRONZE, Gouldsboro, Pennsylvania
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The ice I've surrounded myself with is melting thin .
Soon I'll be drowning in frigid waters, gasping for air.
Is it too much to ask for the slightest notibility ?
To grab my hand and pull me out of this cold environment .

The ice has frozen over, and there's no air left to breathe.
Just a single touch, and you'd feel how numb I've become.
There's the illusion of sunlight above, but it's only an illusion.
Oh, how I would love to feel the warmth of a stranger's palm.

How can I go unnoticed, drowning in the walls that encompass me?
I scream and shout, but not a sound escapes my lips.
Maybe it's my own fault for standing on such unstable ground,
Or maybe for letting such a cold world pull me deep under ....

The author's comments:
Pain, can be such a beauitful thing. However, what happens when all you can feeling is nothing? A cold, black, never-ending, feeling of nothing. And all your looking for is some type of escape from reality, but it never comes. Life kinda sucks in that sense.

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This article has 2 comments.

chocoholic93 said...
on Dec. 18 2008 at 12:36 am
really good!! (: relatable nice word choice makes you think

sftbll07 said...
on Dec. 17 2008 at 7:09 pm
This is accually absolutley amazing (:


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