Ice Has Never Felt This Cold

December 6, 2008
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The ice I've surrounded myself with is melting thin .
Soon I'll be drowning in frigid waters, gasping for air.
Is it too much to ask for the slightest notibility ?
To grab my hand and pull me out of this cold environment .

The ice has frozen over, and there's no air left to breathe.
Just a single touch, and you'd feel how numb I've become.
There's the illusion of sunlight above, but it's only an illusion.
Oh, how I would love to feel the warmth of a stranger's palm.

How can I go unnoticed, drowning in the walls that encompass me?
I scream and shout, but not a sound escapes my lips.
Maybe it's my own fault for standing on such unstable ground,
Or maybe for letting such a cold world pull me deep under ....

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chocoholic93 said...
Dec. 18, 2008 at 12:36 am
really good!! (: relatable nice word choice makes you think
sftbll07 said...
Dec. 17, 2008 at 7:09 pm
This is accually absolutley amazing (:
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