My Words To You

November 22, 2008
By taylorrr GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
taylorrr GOLD, Fremont, Nebraska
11 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself.


You made me laugh, Jeannie.
But now I'm always crying.

I thought you would never leave, Jeannie.
Why did you have to die?

I know you weren't perfect, Jeannie.
You know that right?

Cancer really hurt you, Jeannie.
You put up a great fight.

I watched you tear you apart, Jeannie.
No one thought it could happen to you.

You were so strong, Jeannie.
There were things still to do.

Why did it take you away, Jeannie.
It put you through so much pain.

Yes, you make mistakes, Jeannie.
Now I'm walking in the rain.

I really really miss you, Jeannie.
Why can't you come back?

You were so wonderful, Jeannie.
Why couldn't God cut you some slack.
I just want to say I love you, Jeannie.
So now I'm always crying.

I hope you can hear me, Jeannie.
My tears start drying.

A smile comes to my face.
A little giggle out of my mouth.
I think about those silly
You-had-to-be-there moments.

Are you listening, God.
My words are loud and clear.

I just want my aunt back, God.
You take care of her.

Tell her I love her, God.
Make sure she knows.

I just want to say
I really really miss you, Jeannie.

These are my words to you.


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This article has 6 comments.


on Dec. 5 2009 at 1:47 pm
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
10 articles 0 photos 298 comments
Wow, good job. It's really sweet and thoughtful. It's great, really, and I hope you keep it up (:

JamieNicole said...
on Jan. 28 2009 at 4:33 pm
I'm so proud of Taylor! Such beautiful writing. Way to go!

Mr. H said...
on Dec. 4 2008 at 5:11 pm
Great thoughts Taylor! Congratulations on your publishing.

Murph said...
on Dec. 4 2008 at 2:41 pm
So proud of you for your courage and your talent. Keep writing and sharing!

janet said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 7:46 pm
I loved this poem. I hope you send in more I really would like to read more of your stories.

k.o.o.l.i.o. said...
on Dec. 3 2008 at 2:41 am
This was the BEST poem i have ever read in my life


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