I....am....live....see...will...can...must not...hate...love...

November 16, 2008
By annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."


I am human.
I am female.
I am a teenager.
I am strong.
I am a dreamer.

I live to move forward.
I live to be a shoulder to cry on.
I live so my friends will not be angry with me.
I live to show my family what I have become.
I live to show the world what I see,
through my eyes.

I see the world.
I see the magnificent colors.
I see people who I love.
I see my life passing by.
I see my world falling apart.

I will always smile.
I will do what I can.
I will not shred my flesh.
I will put on a mask.
I will not...cry.

I can do anything.
I can show the world what they are missing.
I can love someone dearly.
I can hate someone entirely.
I can be a sinner.

I must not be afraid.
I must not look around.
I must not look weak.
I must not stay still.
I must not be a burden.

I hate my tears.
I hate my choices.
I hate my head.
I hate not thinking before speaking.
I hate anyone who hurts my loved ones.

I love my friends.
I love my family.
I love my world.
I love my soul.
I love everything, except me.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem to tell who I am, and tell people, as well as myself what I must do, and cannot do.

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on Dec. 2 2009 at 4:28 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

she means it was a lot to hold her attention i think. or maybe too much too even hold it. eh whatever. i loved it! :D

kaykay said...
on Jan. 11 2009 at 11:41 pm
Sarah, what do you mean in your comment??

kaykay said...
on Nov. 29 2008 at 7:01 am
thank u, christina for your feedback :)

im looking for your poem but i cant find it:(

and thank u again for the suggestion and i will try it out.

sarah said...
on Nov. 24 2008 at 8:31 pm
I know that the point was to be repetitive, but it was too much to hold my attention.

on Nov. 23 2008 at 3:41 am
I love this. I absolutely love it. The format is excellent, and I can tell you learned a lot about yourself from writing this.



I'm the same way, I write to make up my mind about something.

Can you please read my poems? I think you will like Alone Again, it is by me, Christina G.

Thank you, and please know I am not asking you to just rate it, but I would honestly like your feedback.

Thanks.



Oh, also, try writing a poem about yourself starting with "I am falling" and don't stop writing. It's a fun way to put thoughts onto paper, but make sure you don't hesitate to think!!


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