Do you remember?

November 12, 2008
By Mac Hat GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
Mac Hat GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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And yes I remember
The days
When things between you and I were
Well;
Great.
And the sky ways always blue
And I was always happy
You were sweet, and silly
Funny, if I remember right.
Which I do
And yes;
Things have changed
And I miss the way they were before
I want them back
But now
I realize that
I’m stronger.
And things are fine without you,
But whenever you remember,
I hope you smile
Or laugh a little.
Or think of me.
And maybe you’ll realize,
That you did have me.
But you did let me fall.
And so;
I now know
and Yes I remember

You made everything right
The colors of my world
Shinning so bright
Blinding me
Blinding me from
The truth.
Yes, yes my dear
I do remember
That you were making me hurt
Deep, deep inside
I opened those blind eyes of mine,
And the colors started to fade
Remember me.
Because, I remember you,
I remember US.



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on Dec. 5 2008 at 12:26 am
Wow, I really like this, I'm not just saying it. I like that you chose not to have the stanzas be equal, not many people do it and sometimes it doesn't work. It definitely works here.

on Nov. 18 2008 at 1:52 am
Wow could this poem relate to my life any better? I give it 5 pretty little stars :)

klijd said...
on Nov. 16 2008 at 4:32 am
awww thats pretty much my life right there in that poem at the moment. shouldnt this be in the magazine?? ithinkso :)


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