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And yes I remember
The days
When things between you and I were
Well;
Great.
And the sky ways always blue
And I was always happy
You were sweet, and silly
Funny, if I remember right.
Which I do
And yes;
Things have changed
And I miss the way they were before
I want them back
But now
I realize that
I’m stronger.
And things are fine without you,
But whenever you remember,
I hope you smile
Or laugh a little.
Or think of me.
And maybe you’ll realize,
That you did have me.
But you did let me fall.
And so;
I now know
and Yes I remember

You made everything right
The colors of my world
Shinning so bright
Blinding me
Blinding me from
The truth.
Yes, yes my dear
I do remember
That you were making me hurt
Deep, deep inside
I opened those blind eyes of mine,
And the colors started to fade
Remember me.
Because, I remember you,
I remember US.





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Broken Lulaby said...
Dec. 5, 2008 at 12:26 am
Wow, I really like this, I'm not just saying it. I like that you chose not to have the stanzas be equal, not many people do it and sometimes it doesn't work. It definitely works here.
 
balletluvaa222 said...
Nov. 18, 2008 at 1:52 am
Wow could this poem relate to my life any better? I give it 5 pretty little stars :)
 
klijd said...
Nov. 16, 2008 at 4:32 am
awww thats pretty much my life right there in that poem at the moment. shouldnt this be in the magazine?? ithinkso :)
 
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