November 11, 2008
Time has become but a blur before my eyes
for darkness without end has swallowed me
and spit me out into the jaws of stillness.
Sun still shines, but its rays no longer reach me
as I am lost in the ocean of sorrow, drowning,
struggling for one last breath, last glimpse of hope.
Slowly descending into its darkest depths,
paralyzed, betrayed, thrown away,
I cling to what pain cannot take from me,
to the source of suffering I will not relinquish:
I love you.

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Oe98 said...
Nov. 16, 2008 at 11:25 pm
Awww. This was cute. A few run-ons but that can be taken care of in editing! (When you can make another sentence, there has to be a conjunction, like "and" "or" and "but" and a comma before the conjunction.)
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