The Meaning of Love? This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

November 8, 2008
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Fantasy100 said...
May 30, 2012 at 6:24 pm
I love it. Its so moving.
Kiana B. said...
May 30, 2012 at 11:48 am
i think this is kind of strange.... there's a song almost exaxtly like this called LOVE TURNED TO DUST
Britty replied...
May 30, 2012 at 11:50 am
yea ik wat ur talking bout
Shine11 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 21, 2012 at 10:10 pm
I am officially obsessed with you. You have a true talent.
Paul B said...
May 21, 2012 at 12:37 pm
I like how the hyperboly in your pom.
morgan dimokza said...
May 5, 2012 at 8:39 am
thnx that is realy abrizing
calmoo said...
May 1, 2012 at 2:33 pm
First thing I have to say is, that was a great poem. You used Limericks in the right way and I like how you has stanzas involved in this poem. You had very good figurative language when you compared things. Great Job.
BrianaK said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 8:04 am
I liked the way you used Figurative Language and Stanza. The poem was good and it had lots of detail. It was very impressive.
Michaela M. said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 9:39 pm
beautful the poem was flowing it felt like a natral current carring me in the direction of your thoughts.
maddyhatter said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 1:14 pm
that was so beautful
peachybeech said...
Apr. 29, 2012 at 8:34 am

This is a beautiful poem! It's so simplistic, but says everything that needs to be said. Love it, great job!


Ziggy7789 said...
Apr. 7, 2012 at 9:51 pm

Funny how this is everything I've been thinking and failing to say :)


Absolutely beautiful, by the way. I love it.

ForeverChaney said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 11:20 am
wow that is amazing... it makes me have hope in finding love again some day....
BeautyFromPain21 said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 2:38 pm
Indilove said...
Mar. 27, 2012 at 8:01 am
this poem is truly amazing great work!!!!
otherpoet said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 10:56 pm
My favorite part is the "as hollow kisses turn to dust," it's so powerful! Great job!
kyrireese said...
Mar. 16, 2012 at 12:28 pm
THIS IS GREAT! I love the imagery!
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White_Trash843 said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 7:41 am
going on my favorites i love it!
stellabella21 said...
Feb. 26, 2012 at 7:40 pm
Incredible. Loved It.
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