Would You

November 8, 2008
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When I was crying a river,
Holding a knife to my wrist,
Would you stop me?
When blood fell into a pool and I
Became lifeless,
Would you want me back?
If I said I was sorry,
Would you listen?
When I held out my hand for you,
Would you take it?
When I begged you to come,
Would you?
When my heart stopped,
And all the pain left,
Would you care?
Would you notice?
When the last rose wilted in that
Pool of blood,
Would you pick it up?
Would you?

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Tiara_princess said...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 9:19 pm
This makes no sense!
Doglover1353 said...
Jan. 19, 2009 at 1:46 am
I love this poem. It's so sad. You're such a great writer. I'm very impressed. I think this was a great work of art! You should submit it to Teenink!
lexi said...
Jan. 16, 2009 at 5:51 pm
cat, this is so, so sweetly exhilarating! no one would let you fall, wouldnt take your hand, or come back for you! love to my last rose, lexi!
door_holder_girl said...
Jan. 12, 2009 at 12:20 am
I would...
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