November 5, 2008
By julie stevens, E.millinocket, ME

Risking everything you had,

just to make your life stop and other people would become sad.

In the background all you hear is your clock going

tick tick tick,

hour after hour, minute after minute, second after,

wait where did the ticking noise go?

The phone rings, it rings again

you realize it's your best friend,

"they gave their life away?"

you scream and hang up the phone and break down into tears.

Now your best friends live in regret and pain.

Blaming yourself for your best friends death,

knew you wish you would die.

Tick tick tick,

you call your friend up and they answer and you say

"no meet me at the park."

You drove there and their waiting for you,

you talk and talk for ever, your glad they changed your mind.

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This article has 1 comment.

on Nov. 11 2008 at 3:28 pm
It's good. I like the idea but there is a little confusion in the poem. Fixing it just a little would help, other than that, good work!


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