daughters gardian angel

October 30, 2008
By aleesha poulin, Perry, NY

sent from heaven,
she watches over me,
her daughters gardian angel,
oh lord let it be.
shes with her everyday,
from sunrise to sundown,
from every hour to everyday,
through every smile and every frown.
goodtimes are never-ending,
drifting on and ever-lasting,
they fill her heart with love,
while the bad ones are passing.
we've been through it all,
together never alone,
our heats will always be together,
forever everything is shown.


The author's comments:
my mother inspired me to write this poem because we have been through it all together and i would give anything to keep it that way!!!! i love my mom <3

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agiebaby30 said...
on Nov. 5 2008 at 4:10 pm
That was really good. I can tell that you two are close. I am close with my mom as well i thought that was really beautiful

Sarah said...
on Nov. 4 2008 at 9:11 pm
For the most part I really liked this. My only criticism is the lines with ever-lasting and never-ending seemed a little repetitive / unnecessary.


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