while alive

October 17, 2008
By angel jones, Augusta, GA

lay me down
put me to rest
i lived this wrong
i faild the test
in these last moments
here with you
i know was right
this love so true

lay me down
put me to rest
my time with you
was always the best
in your arms
i lay here dying
i never wanted
to see you crying
your kiss so sweet
upon my lip
while your hands
rest on my hips
my breath escapes me
but it seem somehow
i feel more alive
then ever right now
you saved my life
with your sweet kiss
and i know at this moment
i would never want to miss


The author's comments:
this is a poem about my one true love.

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christy said...
on Oct. 30 2008 at 12:19 am
very good poem loved it keep up the good work


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